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Title: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on March 12, 2011, 07:22:07 PM
I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net It's called Ambulance Detectives. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6810321/1/Ambulance_Detectives) Check it out read and please review! (http://bestsmileys.com/excited/3.gif)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: AlwaysAJoefan on March 12, 2011, 07:57:41 PM
Nice!  8)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on March 12, 2011, 08:00:45 PM
Thanks. Now all people have to do is read it! (http://bestsmileys.com/beging/1.gif)
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Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: MacGyver on March 13, 2011, 12:18:18 AM
Cool! I'll check it out as soon as I can. I'm sure it's great- I like the title. :)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: MacGyver on March 13, 2011, 12:47:05 AM
Okay- I've read what's on there so far and it's looking pretty good. :)
I left you a review on Fanfiction.net (My username is MacLeaper on that board.)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on March 13, 2011, 01:40:22 PM
Quote from: MacGyver on March 13, 2011, 12:47:05 AM
Okay- I've read what's on there so far and it's looking pretty good. :)
I left you a review on Fanfiction.net (My username is MacLeaper on that board.)

Thanks for the review! ;D Working on chapter six, now. 8)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: hardygirl847 on March 13, 2011, 04:43:38 PM
I find it funny that you start your first HB story on ff.net and announce it to the world but I'm still shy about mine. :) You go girl! (Wow...that makes me sound dated). Anyways, looking forward to more. :)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on March 13, 2011, 07:07:12 PM
Quote from: hardygirl847 on March 13, 2011, 04:43:38 PM
I find it funny that you start your first HB story on ff.net and announce it to the world but I'm still shy about mine. :) You go girl! (Wow...that makes me sound dated). Anyways, looking forward to more. :)

Not the world, just on here! ;D Thanks for the review as well! ;D
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: hardygirl847 on March 18, 2011, 12:05:52 PM
Well, you still are way less shy about it than I am. And being on ff.net is more "worldly" too. Do you ever look to see where people are from that are reading your story? It's really cool to see.

You are quite welcome in regards to reviews.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Mattie on April 18, 2011, 06:59:58 PM
Its really good, better than the UB's in my opinion.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on April 18, 2011, 08:13:26 PM
Quote from: Mattie on April 18, 2011, 06:59:58 PM
Its really good, better than the UB's in my opinion.

Thanks! ;D 8)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on June 02, 2011, 11:26:57 PM
Ambulance Detectives, Chapter seven is up on FF.net! :)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: hardygirl847 on June 14, 2011, 05:46:27 PM
:)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on June 14, 2011, 05:50:05 PM
Quote from: hardygirl847 on June 14, 2011, 05:46:27 PM
:)

Thanks. 8)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: hardygirl847 on June 14, 2011, 05:58:38 PM
You're still braver than I am. :)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on June 25, 2011, 10:21:48 AM
Due to real life, Ambulance Detectives has been pulled from ff.net. I wasn't sure what to do with it and I kind of lost interest in it for now.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: MacGyver on June 25, 2011, 11:06:31 AM
Aw- too bad... but I know how real life gets in the way of more important things- lol. :)
Well, put it aside for a while and maybe you'll come back to it later when you have more time and are more interested. I've had a number of writing projects like that where I've started on them and then had to set them aside for a while before coming back to them to finish them. (And some have been lingering for years...sadly enough.)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on June 25, 2011, 12:00:29 PM
Quote from: MacGyver on June 25, 2011, 11:06:31 AM
Aw- too bad... but I know how real life gets in the way of more important things- lol. :)
Well, put it aside for a while and maybe you'll come back to it later when you have more time and are more interested. I've had a number of writing projects like that where I've started on them and then had to set them aside for a while before coming back to them to finish them. (And some have been lingering for years...sadly enough.)

Yeah. :) I still have my Torchwood story up and that's what I'm into right now. 8)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Bigfootman on July 16, 2011, 12:05:17 PM
It's too bad about Ambulance Detectives, I read the first chapter, and it was really good.

I have a story on fanfiction.net, me and another friend wrote it. It's a crossover betweeen Metroid and Jurrassic Park, and has mutated dinosaurs in it:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6899357/1/Metroid_Prime_Extinction
I started writing parts of the story in Chapter 7, and then I wrote another part in Chapter 8. I also wrote all of Chapter 10, and much of Chapter 11. I also wrote some of Chapter 12. The story will be around 50 chapters long and will be the first in a trilogy.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: HB@1718 on July 17, 2011, 02:36:49 AM
Wow! You're really good at writing! Btw, I'm BACK! Did anyone miss me?  :P
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on July 18, 2011, 12:58:43 PM
Update: Ambulance Detectives is now being reposted. 8)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Bigfootman on July 18, 2011, 08:08:59 PM
Quote from: Katie on July 18, 2011, 12:58:43 PM
Update: Ambulance Detectives is now being reposted. 8)
That's great news!  :)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on July 19, 2011, 10:07:42 AM
Quote from: Dinosaur Dan on July 18, 2011, 08:08:59 PM
That's great news!  :)

8) It'll now be rated M for the ambulance calls. Just to warn you.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: HB@1718 on July 19, 2011, 10:15:25 AM
All right! Thanks for reposting!
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on July 19, 2011, 10:19:37 AM
Quote from: HB@1718 on July 19, 2011, 10:15:25 AM
All right! Thanks for reposting!

;D Have you read it? It's not that the calls are graphic, but it's due to the the subject matter with some of them. And the fact that some people are gutter minded. ::) :P
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: HB@1718 on July 19, 2011, 10:29:51 AM
Haha! :D
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on July 19, 2011, 10:32:09 AM
Quote from: HB@1718 on July 19, 2011, 10:29:51 AM
Haha! :D

Yeah, I know. :D ;)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: hardygirl847 on August 01, 2011, 07:38:40 PM
I was wondering why I didn't get any messages regarding reading the next chapters. Glad to see it's returning.

We can't control what people think or how they read into things. Making M helps you too...in case things do get more involved or something does come up. Write it for yourself and go from there.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on August 01, 2011, 11:09:40 PM
Quote from: hardygirl847 on August 01, 2011, 07:38:40 PM
I was wondering why I didn't get any messages regarding reading the next chapters. Glad to see it's returning.

We can't control what people think or how they read into things. Making M helps you too...in case things do get more involved or something does come up. Write it for yourself and go from there.

I wish FF.net had a rating that was in between T and M. I will make it M rated, but I don't like putting my story with all the porn filled ones that have that rating. When mine isn't that at all.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: MacGyver on August 02, 2011, 01:11:53 PM
Well, T and M are like the movie's PG-13 and R ratings. I'm not sure where you can really go between that....
(Of course, the movies didn't even have a PG-13 rating until 1984 with the arrival of two famous movies from one famous director. Anyone know what I'm talking about here? ;))
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on August 02, 2011, 06:05:38 PM
Quote from: MacGyver on August 02, 2011, 01:11:53 PM
Well, T and M are like the movie's PG-13 and R ratings. I'm not sure where you can really go between that....

Not on FF.net, I know you can't. I know in my Torchwood story, I can't go lower due to the subject matter.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: MacGyver on August 02, 2011, 07:24:45 PM
Quote(Of course, the movies didn't even have a PG-13 rating until 1984 with the arrival of two famous movies from one famous director. Anyone know what I'm talking about here? )
Gremlins and Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom- both from director Steven Spielberg- both helped bring about the creation of the PG-13 rating. Just the little bit of trivia I know about that mainly from being a fan of Indiana Jones. Anyone know the first PG-13 rated movie? :)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on August 04, 2011, 07:40:18 PM
Do I just rate Ambulance Detectives M? :-\ It's not porn.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: MacGyver on August 04, 2011, 07:54:57 PM
I don't think the M rating always has to necessarily mean porn. But if that's more where the story falls, then you should rate it as honestly as possible.

QuoteGremlins and Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom- both from director Steven Spielberg- both helped bring about the creation of the PG-13 rating. Just the little bit of trivia I know about that mainly from being a fan of Indiana Jones. Anyone know the first PG-13 rated movie?
Oh yeah- the movie I was talking about is Red Dawn and it's a great movie! WOLVERINES!!! :) 8)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on August 04, 2011, 07:57:03 PM
Quote from: MacGyver on August 04, 2011, 07:54:57 PM
I don't think the M rating always has to necessarily mean porn. But if that's more where the story falls, then you should rate it as honestly as possible.

Then why is everything that I see there with that rating porn? ::) My Torchwood story isn't, but I rated it M for the subject matter.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: MacGyver on August 04, 2011, 08:55:12 PM
I'm not sure. Perhaps it just seems that way from the stories that you've seen. By the way, when you say porn, I'm assuming you mean sexual content in general, up to and including slash?
Anyway, perhaps this (http://www.fictionratings.com/) will help- it seems there is a distinction in the ratings for mature audiences.
There's "M" - which is mature teens with non-explicit adult themes, and then there's "MA" for adults only, which may contain explicit language and adult themes.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on August 04, 2011, 09:04:20 PM
Quote from: MacGyver on August 04, 2011, 08:55:12 PM
I'm not sure. Perhaps it just seems that way from the stories that you've seen. By the way, when you say porn, I'm assuming you mean sexual content in general, up to and including slash?
Anyway, perhaps this (http://www.fictionratings.com/) will help- it seems there is a distinction in the ratings for mature audiences.
There's "M" - which is mature teens with non-explicit adult themes, and then there's "MA" for adults only, which may contain explicit language and adult themes.

Yes, that's what I mean. I did read that, too. There's slash in T rating too. And they don't do MA but it seems like fanfic authors do it anyway.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on August 18, 2011, 01:53:16 PM
Right, I know I said Ambulance Detectives would be returning, but the truth is I've lost interest in it. :( It don't fit my writing style anymore now that I'm doing Torchwood and House, M.D. If anyone's up on House, I need someone to bounce ideas off with. If anyone is willing to help me, just send me a PM. 8)
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: hardygirl847 on October 03, 2011, 10:16:14 PM
It's hard to write a story and post it while you're not finished with it. Good luck though. And I hope you figured out the rating issue.
Title: Re: I have my first Hardy Boys story on Fanfiction.net
Post by: Hardy Boys UB Fan on October 23, 2011, 09:57:15 PM
Quote from: hardygirl847 on October 03, 2011, 10:16:14 PM
It's hard to write a story and post it while you're not finished with it. Good luck though. And I hope you figured out the rating issue.

I won't post it back up until I have it completed. The rating issue is so hard to figure out. I don't think it's high enough for M rating. :-\